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  托福獨立寫作題目

  Sometimes people wish to be more confident, for example, they may want to express their opinions more frequently in meetings at work, or they may want to contribute more to class discussions at school.

  Which ONE of the following actions do you think would best help to increase confidence in these types of work or school situations? Why?

  -Spending more time preparing for class discussions at school or meetings at work

  -Learning about and practicing techniques to help you become more confident

  -Finding a more experienced person who can give advice about how to handle these situations

  1

  To be a confident speaker who can articulate his thoughts in business meetings or in-class discussions, the best method is to hone the skills that can add some confidence. It is admitted that a meticulous preparation and valuable advice from professors may also instill confidence in speakers, skills aiming to build up confidence are however the cornerstone of them. [開頭段不妨開門見山表明觀點, 并且對于題中剩下兩個選項做出簡短讓步 ]

  重點詞匯：

  Hone v. 磨礪 [技能等]

  Meticulous adj. 一絲不茍的, 周密的

  Instill in 灌輸 [意識等]

  Articulate v. 說清楚

  2

  Uncertainties about the topics of class discussions are a major contributor to people’ silence, a typical sign of lacking confidence, in classroom discussions; and likewise, self-repetitions or vague opinions during business meetings are common in people without confidence. In this case, a thorough preparation helps them gain insights into classroom discussions and polish up the drafts of the business reports, and this seems to be able to build up their confidence. [← 先說明選項一的可取之處, 論證思路為先拋出一系列棘手的問題,然后用該選項將這些問題解決了,于是該選項的可取之處也就自然點明了。] However, can an adequate preparation single-handedly make a confident speaker? In fact, unless equipped with sound speaking skills, a speaker with well-prepared drafts cannot deliver them in a lucid manner, let alone displaying confidence before the audience. [進入駁回,記得用好”Unless”, 也就是除非有我們的選項,不然單憑選項一是沒有用的] In other words, after preparing carefully, a speaker need to learn and practice some body language that showcase his confidence. It does not take a leap of imagination to picture how confident would a man look if he maintains eye contact with others when voicing opinions in groups or actively encouraging comments and feedback from others. Hence, to increase confidence, one should practice relevant techniques in the first place.

  重點詞匯：

  Polish up 修改,潤色

  Be a major contributor to 是某事情的主要誘因

  single-handedly adv. 單槍匹馬地, 獨自地

  Voice v. 表達(感情,意見等)

  3

  It would be redundant to emphasize the importance of consulting experienced persons about how to improve confidence. However, odds are good that their advice may not necessarily prove relevant. To be more specific, it is well known that theoretically sound advice may not work in practice, meaning that merely listening to suggestions from the experienced can hardly make a difference in one’s confidence. Instead, their suggestions should be integrated with the practice of techniques that help one become confident in business or classroom context. [是不是發現說理不好說下去了? 那么便開始舉例吧, 但要記住例證部分要具體們也就是說明前面的寬泛名詞”theory” “techniques”等具體是什么]

  重點詞匯：

  theoretically sound advice 理論上完美的建議

  Integrate v. 成為一體,結合