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  上海新航道托福培訓小編特別整理了托福考試的詳情，這次給大家帶來了寫的關于2021年10月23日托福獨立寫作范文及解析。希望幫助考生對照文本更好的研究真題，充分備考，爭取理想成績，實現留學夢想。

  10月23日托福獨立寫作真題題目及范文

  Do you agree or disagree with the fllowing statement?

  It is better to take risks and explore new things when you are older rather than when you are younger.

  The statement which assefthat it is better to take risks and explore new things at an older age rather than when you are younger has iriggered discussion. While conventional wisdom may support this idea, I hold a negative view about it.

  本段解析

  開頭段先 paraphrase 題目中給出的 statement.再清晰給出自己的態度和觀點。此處一些固定的句式可以借鑒。

  assert v.堅稱

  trigger discussion 引發討論

  conventional wisdom 傳統的觀點

  Surely, young people don't have enough time and money to support themselves to take risks and explore nove things. For example, they need to work hard to earn money so that they can support their own lives such as paying for the rent, spending loads of money on grocery,covering the loan from buying a house if possible.Also,young people have to work almost seven to eleven, so they don't have extra time to explore new things. Therefore, they lack time to take risks.However, for older people,most of them just retred from their jobs. Probably they have done the job for 30 years or even more, therefore, it is more likely for them to blow their great savings on risky events. Since they don't have to work,they also have a lot of free time.Ive seen a lot of old people spending their vacation on a coastal city,or leaning how to use computer in a community center. Therefore, young people don't seem to have extra time and money to deal with new things.

  本段解析

  本段作為一種讓步，說明了younger的時候不適合冒險的理由。【理由有2個∶時間和金錢】。在寫 supporting details 的過程中，從 money 和 time 2個方面分別對 young 和 old 進行對比陳述。

  novel adj.新奇的

  groceryn.雜物

  retrev.退休

  blow v.揮霍

  However, young people do own advantages over old people in terms of physical and mental conditions. For example,some young people would choose to do extreme sports such as going bungee,parasailing and so forth. Their good physical condition allows them to do such activities. However, some old people may already have bad health conditions such as heart diseases, high blood pressure and a weak immune system, which can't support them to do intense sports or some related risky things. For another, young people can stay calm when facing difficulties while old people probably will be anxious. For example, what if an old man lost his passport when traveling abroad, he might get panic and stay stil,doing nothing but waiting for his family, friends or even a working stuff from agencyto help him. However, if this happens to a young person, most likely, he would try to solve the problems by himself, for example,going to the police station to check the closed circuit television monitor to see if he can find it or checking all the information he needs to apply for a new certificate from the embassy. Therefore, young people seem to have better physical and mental conditions to deal with emergencies than older people do,which enables them to explore new things.

  本段解析

  本段是反駁第二段中的觀點。從 physical and mental condition 兩個方面來寫年輕時候冒險其實更好.同樣的。也要從old 和 young 進行對比陳述。

  in terms of 就….…而言

  immune system 免疫系統

  extreme sports 極限運動

  parasailing n.帆傘運動

  agency n.中介.代理

  embassy n. 大使館

  Moreover, young people are more wiing to try new things. By this I mean, they have a tendency to try new things. For example, my brother,a 19-year-old boy,was preparing to travel to America last year. He put effort into learning a new language, reading, listening,and speaking by watching videos online,reading classic novels and so on. However, when his grandparents also went for a trip, they refused to lear any new words or sentences because they didn't want to. They chose to keep their current state and just hired an interpreter to help with their language, Therefore, young people are more willing to, in other words,delberately choose to, try new things.

  本段解析：

  本段是利用 personal 的例子來進一步的陳述為何在年輕時候更愿意嘗試新的東西。此處就段落3 進行一種遞進，加強之意。注∶此處同樣為了緊扣文章主題，從 voung and old分別對 idea進行支持

  be illig to do 愿意做某事

  deliberately adv.故意地

  current adj.目前的

  In sum,even though some people believe it is better to take risks when you are older, I contend that it is better to do such things when you are younger.

  本段解析

  一個簡練的結尾conclusion重新闡述自己的觀點即可。

  contend v 認為