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  10月13日托福獨立寫作真題題目及范文

  Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: During big events, such as weddings or graduations, some people choose to record many videos and take numerous pictures on their smartphones, while others decide to record few or no videos and take few or no pictures. Which choice or decision do you prefer and why?

  There is no doubt that every body wants to cherish their great moments in one way or another. However,personally speaking,I do not think shooting videos or taking pictures using one's smartphone is a good idea in those invaluable moments.

  本段解析∶

  開頭段言簡意賅.背景指出議題的初衷后.直接表態。

  cherish v.珍惜.懷念

  invaluable adj.極其寶貴的

  Primarily, using smartphone to record in big events can be so distracting that it hinders people from really enjoying it. When you are busy with their smartphones, how is it possible for them to notice and enjoy their felings in the moment? Could you ever imagine a couple in the middle of their wedding, holding up their smartphones and shooting video for themselves? Even if you are not the star of the event, it is not appropriate, either. We have all been through the situations-say, a rock concert or a road show-where the audience in front are holding up their phones, which totally blocks the view of those in the back. Could they really enjoy the event? Neither. People in front may just want to post some pictures in their Facebook, and never take a look at the video but constantly check their likes and comments, while those in the back could see nothing but an ocean of screens in the air.

  本段解析

  本段從主角和觀眾兩個角度，舉婚禮和演唱會的例子.來說明在重要事件中。用手機錄像或拍照會非常影響人們珍惜當下的重要時刻。

  hinder v.妨礙

  post v.發《朋友圈，動態等)

  likes and comments 點贊和評論

  an ocean of 大片的.大量的

  Furthermore, for the purpose of recording meaningful big events, there are more suitable approaches other than using one's smartphone.For instance, hiring some professional photographers is for sure a better choice.Their profession would allow them to capture the most memorable moments in the most desirable way. Besides, based on their experience of fm edina, they are also ready to judge whether they have collected what they would need in the following steps. By contrast, for us who are not adept at photography, there is always a great risk that we do not have enough usable materials when we want to integrate the video clips on our phone into a comprehensible story.

  本段解析：

  提出更好的方法.對比論證說明為什么專業的攝影師會比自己拿手機拍攝更適合。

  for sure 毫無疑問

  flm editing視頻剪輯

  adept adj.擅長的

  integrate v.整合

  To be brief,using one's own cellphone to take photos or shoot videos in big events does not mulkegood ssnse to me,for it not only distracts me from living in the moment. but also does not rival other solutions, such as recruiting some professionals in this field.

  本段解析：

  結尾段再次表態，并概括、呼應分論點。

  to be brief 簡而言之

  make good sense 說得通.理由充分

  rival v.比得上.能與.相匹敵