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  雅思寫作大作文題目：

  Some people think that scientific research is a waste of time and money. To what degree do you agree or disagree?

  Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

  解析&審題

  本周考題要求大家討論“科學(xué)研究是不是在浪費(fèi)金錢和時(shí)間”。相信大家拿到題目，肯定就是一邊倒地認(rèn)為這個(gè)觀點(diǎn)是錯(cuò)誤的，因?yàn)榭茖W(xué)研究是非常重要的，然后就開始尋找證明科學(xué)研究是重要的相關(guān)證據(jù)(也許能找出很多理由)。如果我們的考生這樣寫，寫得再好，也不可能得到很高的分?jǐn)?shù)，因?yàn)闆](méi)有完整回答題目的問(wèn)題，在 “task response”這一條上就會(huì)丟分。請(qǐng)大家一定要仔細(xì)閱讀題目，搞清楚題目中所給的所有觀點(diǎn)，然后在作文中對(duì)這些觀點(diǎn)進(jìn)行必要的回應(yīng)(無(wú)論是贊同還是反對(duì))。

  就本題而言，考生除了論證科學(xué)研究的重要性之外，還必須回應(yīng)“為什么有些人會(huì)認(rèn)為科學(xué)研究是浪費(fèi)金錢和時(shí)間”，你如何看待這個(gè)“浪費(fèi)”的觀點(diǎn)?(考生可以贊同這個(gè)觀點(diǎn)，反對(duì)這個(gè)觀點(diǎn)，或者對(duì)這個(gè)觀點(diǎn)進(jìn)行解釋)。

  老師筆記

  01

  Research is the most important activity to achieve scientific progress for a better future. To a great extent, scientific research is necessary and not a waste of time and money. The bottom line is that scientific research not only needs more funding, but also “smarter” spending.

  研究是實(shí)現(xiàn)科學(xué)進(jìn)步、走向更美好未來(lái)的最重要活動(dòng)。在很大程度上，科學(xué)研究是必要的，而不是浪費(fèi)時(shí)間和金錢。底線是在科學(xué)研究方面，不僅需要更多的資金，還需要“更聰明”的支出。

  解析

  (1) 本段為開頭段，回應(yīng)題目中的兩個(gè)觀點(diǎn)：科學(xué)研究不是浪費(fèi)時(shí)間和金錢，但要“聰明地”花錢。很多同學(xué)在雅思寫作中使用一邊倒的結(jié)構(gòu)，比如在本題中僅僅討論科學(xué)研究的重要性，卻不顧及題目中“很多人認(rèn)為科學(xué)研究是浪費(fèi)時(shí)間和金錢”這個(gè)觀點(diǎn)，這樣寫就沒(méi)有完整回答題目問(wèn)題，在評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)中“task response”這項(xiàng)上可能導(dǎo)致丟分。

  (2) achieve 達(dá)到;實(shí)現(xiàn)

  (3) to a great extent 在很大程度上

  (4) bottom line 底線

  02

  Scientific research, although being expensive and laborious, is the engine of human prosperity by endlessly seeking the truth to clear doubts and find solutions. To begin with, advances across virtually all fields of science show promise for solving puzzles about the nature of the world—from diseases and climate-change to the origin of the universe. For most scientists, the search for truth is the main motivation to a career characterized by long hours and personal sacrifice, but huge money is also required to carry out their research projects successfully. And this is why most people would agree that investments in scientific research pay off in the long run, while only a minority would argue that it is not worth the huge time and money put into it.

  科學(xué)研究雖然昂貴而費(fèi)力，但卻是人類繁榮的引擎，它無(wú)止境地尋求真理，以消除疑慮和找到解決辦法。首先，幾乎所有科學(xué)領(lǐng)域的進(jìn)展都顯示出有希望解決有關(guān)世界本質(zhì)的疑惑-從疾病和氣候變化到宇宙的起源。對(duì)大多數(shù)科學(xué)家來(lái)說(shuō)，尋找真理是其職業(yè)的主要?jiǎng)訖C(jī)，其特點(diǎn)是長(zhǎng)時(shí)間工作和個(gè)人犧牲，但是要成功地完成他們的研究項(xiàng)目也需要巨額的資金。這就是為什么大多數(shù)人都認(rèn)為，對(duì)科學(xué)研究的投資從長(zhǎng)遠(yuǎn)來(lái)看是有回報(bào)的，而只有少數(shù)人會(huì)爭(zhēng)辯說(shuō)，投入大量的時(shí)間和金錢是不值得的。

  解析

  (1) 本段討論科學(xué)研究的重要性，以及投資科學(xué)研究的必要性。有些同學(xué)在討論科學(xué)研究的重要性時(shí)，忘記了把它與投資聯(lián)系起來(lái)討論，這樣也可能被視為跑題，因?yàn)楸绢}的核心是討論“科學(xué)研究是否值得投入精力和金錢”，考生需要直接回答這個(gè)問(wèn)題。

  (2) laborious 辛苦的;艱苦的

  (3) prosperity 繁榮

  (4) virtually 幾乎(=nearly)

  (5) origin 來(lái)源;起源

  (6) characterized by... 以......為特征

  (7) pay off 有回報(bào);成功;值得

  (8) in the long run 從長(zhǎng)遠(yuǎn)看

  03

  Nevertheless, the public needs to be convinced that money (along with time) is being spent wisely since pointless scientific research projects may burn through time and money, which leads to a meaningless waste in both, of course. To avoid that waste, scientists need to prove that their research projects are worth it, and that the spending is in an acceptable manner for scientific advancement. Unfortunately, the inefficiency or uncertainty at both government and university levels where research is being conducted sometimes do make people think that the investment in some unnecessary research projects is not “smart” enough, so to speak.

  然而，公眾需要確信，金錢(以及時(shí)間)正在被明智地使用，因?yàn)楹翢o(wú)意義的科學(xué)研究項(xiàng)目可能會(huì)消耗掉時(shí)間和金錢，從而導(dǎo)致在這兩方面的無(wú)謂浪費(fèi)。為了避免這種浪費(fèi)，科學(xué)家們需要證明他們的研究項(xiàng)目是值得的，而且花費(fèi)相對(duì)于科學(xué)進(jìn)步來(lái)說(shuō)是可以接受的。然而，在進(jìn)行研究的政府和大學(xué)兩級(jí)的低效率或不確定性，有時(shí)確實(shí)使人們認(rèn)為投資于一些不必要的研究還不夠“聰明”(打個(gè)比方)。

  解析

  (1)本段討論為什么有人會(huì)認(rèn)為投資科學(xué)研究是浪費(fèi)金錢。本段的討論很有必要，因?yàn)楸仨毣貞?yīng)題目中提出的任何觀點(diǎn)(無(wú)論你同意還是不同意)。

  (2)to be convinced that... 確信......

  (3)pointless 沒(méi)有意義的

  (4)inefficiency 低效率

  (5)so to speak 打個(gè)比方

  04

  In conclusion, it is necessary to invest in research for scientific progress. But scientific research should be done wisely so as not to result in a waste of time and money. In all events, there would be no better tomorrow without scientific research today.

  總之，有必要投資于為了科學(xué)進(jìn)步的研究。但是，應(yīng)該明智地進(jìn)行科學(xué)研究，以免浪費(fèi)時(shí)間和金錢。無(wú)論如何，沒(méi)有今天的科學(xué)研究，明天就不會(huì)更好。

  解析

  (1) 本段為結(jié)論段：對(duì)前面討論的兩個(gè)觀點(diǎn)進(jìn)行總結(jié)，并明確提出自己的觀點(diǎn)。

  (2) result in... 導(dǎo)致......

  (3) in all events 無(wú)論如何

  本范文中可背誦的句子

  1. Scientific research, although being expensive and laborious, is the engine of human prosperity by endlessly seeking the truth to clear doubts and find solutions.

  科學(xué)研究雖然昂貴而費(fèi)力，但卻是人類繁榮的引擎，它無(wú)止境地尋求真理，以消除疑慮和找到解決辦法。

  2. Advances across virtually all fields of science show promise for solving puzzles about the nature of the world—from diseases and climate-change to the origin of the universe.

  幾乎所有科學(xué)領(lǐng)域的進(jìn)展都顯示出有希望解決有關(guān)世界本質(zhì)的疑惑-從疾病和氣候變化到宇宙的起源。

  3. For most scientists, the search for truth is the main motivation to a career characterized by long hours and personal sacrifice, but huge money is also required to carry out their research projects successfully.

  對(duì)大多數(shù)科學(xué)家來(lái)說(shuō)，尋找真理是其職業(yè)的主要?jiǎng)訖C(jī)，其特點(diǎn)是長(zhǎng)時(shí)間工作和個(gè)人犧牲，但是要成功地完成他們的研究項(xiàng)目也需要巨額的資金。

  4. Unfortunately, the inefficiency or uncertainty at both government and university levels where research is being conducted sometimes do make people think that the investment in some unnecessary research projects is not “smart” enough, so to speak.

  然而，在進(jìn)行研究的政府和大學(xué)兩級(jí)的低效率或不確定性，有時(shí)確實(shí)使人們認(rèn)為投資于一些不必要的研究還不夠“聰明”(打個(gè)比方)。

  5.Scientific research should be done wisely so as not to result in a waste of time and money.

  應(yīng)該明智地進(jìn)行科學(xué)研究，以免浪費(fèi)時(shí)間和金錢。

  雅思寫作大作文高分參考范文：

  Research is the most important activity to achieve scientific progress for a better future. To a great extent, scientific research is necessary and not a waste of time and money. The bottom line is that scientific research not only needs more funding, but also “smarter” spending.

  Scientific research, although being expensive and laborious, is the engine of human prosperity by endlessly seeking the truth to clear doubts and find solutions. To begin with, advances across virtually all fields of science show promise for solving puzzles about the nature of the world—from diseases and climate-change to the origin of the universe. For most scientists, the search for truth is the main motivation to a career characterized by long hours and personal sacrifice, but huge money is also required to carry out their research projects successfully. And this is why most people would agree that investments in scientific research pay off in the long run, while only a minority would argue that it is not worth the huge time and money put into it.

  Nevertheless, the public needs to be convinced that money (along with time) is being spent wisely since pointless scientific research projects may burn through time and money, which leads to a meaningless waste in both, of course. To avoid that waste, scientists need to prove that their research projects are worth it, and that the spending is in an acceptable manner for scientific advancement. Unfortunately, the inefficiency or uncertainty at both government and university levels where research is being conducted sometimes do make people think that the investment in some unnecessary research projects is not “smart” enough, so to speak.

  In conclusion, it is necessary to invest in research for scientific progress. But scientific research should be done wisely so as not to result in a waste of time and money. In all events, there would be no better tomorrow without scientific research today.