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  2019年9月7日雅思大作文題目：經(jīng)濟(jì)發(fā)展與環(huán)境保護(hù)的關(guān)系

  Some people say that economic growth is the only way to end world poverty and hunger. However, others say that economic growth is damaging the environment and should be stopped. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

  解析&審題

  本題的解題關(guān)鍵在于如何認(rèn)識(shí)經(jīng)濟(jì)發(fā)展與環(huán)境之間的關(guān)系：我們能否因?yàn)榻?jīng)濟(jì)發(fā)展破壞環(huán)境就停止經(jīng)濟(jì)發(fā)展?老雅的寫作思路如下：

  1. 經(jīng)濟(jì)發(fā)展的確會(huì)帶來(lái)環(huán)境破壞;

  2. 但我們不能因此停止經(jīng)濟(jì)發(fā)展，因?yàn)椋篈. 只有發(fā)展經(jīng)濟(jì)，人類才能過(guò)上好的生活;B.經(jīng)濟(jì)發(fā)展給環(huán)境帶來(lái)的破壞可以減少，甚至消除。

  3. 結(jié)論：我們不能放棄經(jīng)濟(jì)發(fā)展，而是應(yīng)該找到如何減輕經(jīng)濟(jì)發(fā)展帶來(lái)的環(huán)境破壞。

  以下請(qǐng)看老雅的高分范文。

  老師筆記

  01

  As is known to all, the only solution to poverty and hunger is economic growth. However, many people raise objections to economic progress on the ground that it will cause huge damage to the environment.

  眾所周知，解決貧窮和饑餓的唯一辦法是經(jīng)濟(jì)增長(zhǎng)。然而，許多人反對(duì)經(jīng)濟(jì)進(jìn)步，因?yàn)樗鼤?huì)對(duì)環(huán)境造成巨大的破壞。

  解析

  (1) 本段先引出話題，并對(duì)題目中的觀點(diǎn)進(jìn)行重述。

  (2) As is known to all 眾所周知

  (3) Solution 解決方案

  (4) Raise objections to... 對(duì)......提出反對(duì)

  (5) On the ground that... 基于......

  02

  It is true, of course, that rapid economic growth often comes at the expense of the environment. This has happened again and again in the world, especially in the developing countries. The relentless urbanisation process, for example, has destroyed numerous natural open spaces and animal habitat, and had the dull concrete buildings in their place. Meanwhile, it is not uncommon at all to see the rivers and streams around paper factories (or other manufacturing factories) are so polluted that the water is no longer drinkable.

  當(dāng)然，經(jīng)濟(jì)的迅速增長(zhǎng)往往是以犧牲環(huán)境為代價(jià)的。這一次又一次在世界上發(fā)生，特別是在發(fā)展中國(guó)家。例如，大肆的城市化進(jìn)程摧毀了眾多自然空地和動(dòng)物棲息地，并在它們的位置上建起了了無(wú)生趣的混凝土建筑。同時(shí)，絕不罕見的是，造紙廠( 或其他制造工廠)周圍的河流和溪流受到嚴(yán)重污染，以至于水不再可飲用。

  解析

  (1) 本段論述經(jīng)濟(jì)發(fā)展的確會(huì)帶來(lái)環(huán)境破壞。本段主要是用舉例法來(lái)說(shuō)明：城市化進(jìn)程摧毀了空地和動(dòng)物棲息地，工廠附近的河流和溪流被污染。

  (2) Relentless 肆虐的;殘酷無(wú)情的

  (3) Habitat 棲息地

  (4) It is not uncommon that... 不罕見

  03

  Yet this does not follow that we could do without economic growth. For one thing, only with fast economic development can people have the opportunities to enjoy a better material life, which is the first-tier need of all people at all times. Though this does not suggest that people's insatiable desire should always be met by developing economy, we can rather safely say that economic growth is often the primary concern for all people, especially those living in poverty and hunger. For another, though economic growth will necessarily bring negative effects on the environment, the effects can well be minimized or even eliminated. Covered with green trees and grasses, many big cities have now attracted birds and other animals back again. The rivers and streams around factories have become clean, too, as purifying technologies are put into use.

  然而，這并不意味著我們可以不要經(jīng)濟(jì)增長(zhǎng)。一方面，只有在經(jīng)濟(jì)快速發(fā)展的情況下，人們才有機(jī)會(huì)享受更好的物質(zhì)生活，這是任何時(shí)代所有人的第一層次需求。雖然這并不表明應(yīng)該通過(guò)發(fā)展經(jīng)濟(jì)來(lái)滿足人們貪得無(wú)厭的欲望，但我們可以相當(dāng)安全地說(shuō)，經(jīng)濟(jì)增長(zhǎng)經(jīng)常是所有人，特別是生活在貧困和饑餓中的人首要關(guān)注的東西。另一方面，雖然經(jīng)濟(jì)增長(zhǎng)必然會(huì)對(duì)環(huán)境帶來(lái)負(fù)面影響，但這個(gè)影響完全可以減少到最低，甚至完全消除。現(xiàn)在，許多大城市被綠樹和草所覆蓋，將鳥類和其他動(dòng)物又吸引了回來(lái)，而且凈化技術(shù)投入使用后，工廠周圍的河流和溪流也變得干凈了。

  解析

  (1) 本段討論我們不能因?yàn)榄h(huán)境因素而停止經(jīng)濟(jì)發(fā)展，提供了兩個(gè)原因：第一，經(jīng)濟(jì)發(fā)展才能讓人們過(guò)上好生活;第二，環(huán)境問(wèn)題可以得到有效解決。

  (2) Do without... 沒(méi)有......也接受

  (3) For one thing, ...; for another, ... 其一，......; 其二，......

  (4) The first-tier need 第一層次的需求

  (5) Insatiable 貪得無(wú)厭的

  (6) Primary 首要的

  (7) Eliminated 消滅;消除

  04

  My opinion, then, is that economic growth is forever needed in spite of its potential risks to the environment. What we ought to do is try to find ways of reducing its effect on the environment, rather than give up economic development altogether.

  因此，我的觀點(diǎn)是，盡管經(jīng)濟(jì)增長(zhǎng)對(duì)環(huán)境有潛在風(fēng)險(xiǎn)，但它永遠(yuǎn)是必要的。我們應(yīng)該做的是設(shè)法減少經(jīng)濟(jì)發(fā)展對(duì)環(huán)境的影響，而不是完全放棄經(jīng)濟(jì)發(fā)展。

  解析

  (1) 本段是結(jié)論，并明確提出自己對(duì)這個(gè)問(wèn)題的觀點(diǎn)。

  (2) Potential 潛在的

  (3) Reduce 降低;壓縮

  (4) Altogether 完全地;徹底地

  高分范文：

  As is known to all, the only solution to poverty and hunger is economic growth. However, many people raise objections to economic progress on the ground that it will cause huge damage to the environment.

  It is true, of course, that rapid economic growth often comes at the expense of the environment. This has happened again and again in the world, especially in the developing countries. The relentless urbanisation process, for example, has destroyed numerous natural open spaces and animal habitat, and had the dull concrete buildings in their place. Meanwhile, it is not uncommon at all to see the rivers and streams around paper factories (or other manufacturing factories) are so polluted that the water is no longer drinkable.

  Yet this does not follow that we could do without economic growth. For one thing, only with fast economic development can people have the opportunities to enjoy a better material life, which is the first-tier need of all people at all times. Though this does not suggest that people's insatiable desire should always be met by developing economy, we can rather safely say that economic growth is often the primary concern for all people, especially those living in poverty and hunger. For another, though economic growth will necessarily bring negative effects on the environment, the effects can well be minimized or even eliminated. Covered with green trees and grasses, many big cities have now attracted birds and other animals back again. The rivers and streams around factories have become clean, too, as purifying technologies are put into use.

  My opinion, then, is that economic growth is forever needed in spite of its potential risks to the environment. What we ought to do is try to find ways of reducing its effect on the environment, rather than give up economic development altogether.

  建議背誦的句子

  1. It is true, of course, that rapid economic growth often comes at the expense of the environment.

  當(dāng)然，經(jīng)濟(jì)的迅速增長(zhǎng)往往是以犧牲環(huán)境為代價(jià)的。

  2. The relentless urbanisation process, for example, has destroyed numerous natural open spaces and animal habitat, and had the dull concrete buildings in their place.

  例如，大肆的城市化進(jìn)程摧毀了眾多自然空地和動(dòng)物棲息地，并在它們的位置上建起了了無(wú)生趣的混凝土建筑。

  3. For one thing, only with fast economic development can people have the opportunities to enjoy a better material life, which is the first-tier need of all people at all times.

  一方面，只有在經(jīng)濟(jì)快速發(fā)展的情況下，人們才有機(jī)會(huì)享受更好的物質(zhì)生活，這是任何時(shí)代所有人的第一層次需求。

  4. Though this does not suggest that people's insatiable desire should always be met by developing economy, we can rather safely say that economic growth is often the primary concern for all people, especially those living in poverty and hunger.

  雖然這并不表明應(yīng)該通過(guò)發(fā)展經(jīng)濟(jì)來(lái)滿足人們貪得無(wú)厭的欲望，但我們可以相當(dāng)安全地說(shuō)，經(jīng)濟(jì)增長(zhǎng)經(jīng)常是所有人，特別是生活在貧困和饑餓中的人首要關(guān)注的東西。

  5. What we ought to do is try to find ways of reducing its effect on the environment, rather than give up economic development altogether.

  我們應(yīng)該做的是設(shè)法減少經(jīng)濟(jì)發(fā)展對(duì)環(huán)境的影響，而不是完全放棄經(jīng)濟(jì)發(fā)展。