新航道

  今天的主題依舊是“柱圖”。以2019年3月2日的真題為例，新航道小編帶來章躍老師關(guān)于柱圖的寫作范文。希望對各位備考的考生們有所幫助。

  2019年3月2日真題

  國內(nèi)A類：柱圖

  The chart below shows the percentage of expenditures in different aspects in the UK in 1957 and 2007.

  Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

  柱形圖：數(shù)據(jù)之間的比較關(guān)系(高低=大小)

  關(guān)鍵概念：

  ☆ 同項(xiàng)目不同時間：(以housing為例)1957年對比2007年。

  ☆ 同時間不同項(xiàng)目：以藍(lán)色(1957年為例)housing對比transport.

  數(shù)據(jù)的分組，兩種方式：

  ☆ 兩色柱子比高低;

  ☆ 兩色柱子差異大小：比如人為設(shè)定同一項(xiàng)目內(nèi)兩色的柱子的差異達(dá)到或超過5%就是差異大，反之則差異小。

  高分范文及解析

  The bars illustrate the percentage of UK households’ spending in different categories in two historical years, which are 1957 and 2007.

  按照第二種分組方式來寫作：

  Housing, food, drinks, and clothing are the four categories in which people did not spend obviously more in one year and obviously less in the other year. [注意主語選擇，注意定語從句選擇] In these categories, the difference is within 5 percent. It is noteworthy that there is no difference between the two years in terms of people’s expenditure on tobacco. The spending on housing (a quarter or more) is particularly notable, as it was the far larger expense in both years.

  [如果復(fù)制上一段的句型：] Transport, fuel, and other goods and services are the three categories in which people spent obviously less in one year and far more in the other year. In these categories, the difference is 5 percent.

  [當(dāng)然不能復(fù)制上一段的句型，改一改。以及豐富一下細(xì)節(jié)信息：] In the categories of transport, fuel, and other goods and services, the difference between the two years is 5 percent. To be specific, people spent proportionally more in 2007 than in 1957 in terms of the use of fuel and purchasing other goods and services, and there was an opposite situation in terms of the expenditure on transport.

  描述當(dāng)時的情況的時候，用了過去時。描述純粹數(shù)據(jù)大小關(guān)系的時候，用了現(xiàn)在時。

  Overall, the difference between the two years varies from category to category, and the enormous spending on housing stands out.

  中規(guī)中矩的寫法，主要突破句型、語法、詞匯。