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  每場雅思考試之后，新航道上海學(xué)校雅思頻道小編會第一時間分享雅思考試小作文范文及解析，希望對各位備考考生們有所幫助，對雅思寫作有所提高!本文是6月22日雅思小作文范文及解析。

  雅思小作文題目：

  The chart below shows proportions of males and females getting top grades in the S school, compared with the national average.

  參考高分范文及解析：

  “同時不同項”：在同一個時間點上，不同科目，不同性別，學(xué)校均值和全國均值

  數(shù)據(jù)分組：性別之間：組1比組2;組3比組4。學(xué)校均值和全國均值：組1比組3;組2比組4。不同科目：描述每個組的具體情況時自然會寫到。

  The bars are the illustrations of the performance of male and female students in obtaining top grades in S School, and the performance is compared with the national average.

  In this school, Science, language subjects and Humanity are three areas where there are marked differences between males and females, ← 總分 [挑出差異最大的一個科目，并且交代男女之間的數(shù)據(jù)關(guān)系，別的細節(jié)省略。] → and the difference is most distinct [表示程度的形容詞，是寫作的詞匯關(guān)鍵] in language subjects, where 50 percent of females attain top grades, and the percentage is more than three times of that of males. Nationwide, there is a different pattern. ← 總 [借助前面建立起來的語境寫，different這個詞的含義是指接下來的內(nèi)容是針對前文內(nèi)容而來的。]，分 → The only realm where the disparity is considerable is Humanity, as females outperform males by a huge margin of 25 percent.

  The school, its male students, to be exact, performs better than the national average in Math (30 percent to 18 percent nationwide) and less good than national average in language subjects (15 percent to 30 percent) ← 分，總 → and these are the obvious differences. As for females, Science is where the gap is largest. ← 總，分→ As 30 percent of females achieve top grades on the national scale and only 16 percent of the school’s female students achieve the same level, ← 分，總 → School falls behind.

  Overall, in terms of both scale and gender, the variation is significant in some subjects and moderate in others. [數(shù)據(jù)規(guī)律不凸顯的時候，就籠統(tǒng)寫]

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