為你支招雅思寫作小作文|不同年份,又有不同項目,怎么寫才好？
2019/5/14 13:55:38來源：新航道作者：新航道
摘要：每場雅思考試之后，新航道上海學校 雅思頻道小編會第一時間分享每次雅思考試小作文范文及解析，希望對各位備考考生們有所幫助，對雅思寫作有所提高!本期【雅思小作文真題直擊】，我們來以4月13日真題為例，再來為你支招小作文!
每場雅思考試之后，新航道上海學校 雅思頻道小編會第一時間分享每次雅思考試小作文范文及解析，希望對各位備考考生們有所幫助，對雅思寫作有所提高!本期【雅思小作文真題直擊】，我們來以4月13日真題為例，再來為你支招小作文!
2019年4月13日雅思小作文題目
國內(A類)：柱圖
高分范文及解析
首先，我們需要知道：柱圖的原始形式是表格：
思路：分組很重要!!
分兩組：歷史時間(2008年和2013年)一組，將來時間另一組。
首先，細化歷史時間一組的信息時：history在兩個年份里都是極小數字，engineering在2013年最突出(同時，biology和business的相同數目這一信息被舍棄)，2008年比較顯眼(因為biology和engineering的數目相同)。
然后，細化將來時間一組：engineering最突出，另外三個學科差不多(同時，只說明最小數目在biology)。
給各位“烤鴨”打個樣兒：
The four groups of bars are the illustrations of the numbers of applications for four courses of a university in three separate years – 2008, 2013 and 2025.
In the two historical years, with merely 500 or 600 students studying it, History was the obvious undesired realm of study. [接下來一句“信息過渡”] Distinct from History, Business, Biology and Engineering were popular; however, their popularity varied. It is most notable that Engineering received as many as 5,000 applications [換個概念寫作：“收到了6千份申請”，防止信息的生硬感] in the year of 2013. In addition, the year of 2008 is also noticeable, as it witnessed that the numbers of applicants for biology and for business were both 4,000. [主語劃線部分的兩種狀語形式]
By 2025, the high levels of [(某事物)的某種程度的] popularity of Engineering is likely to remain, and the estimate [估值] for the number of applicants is 6,000. By marked/stark contrast, the other three spheres are projected to be far [程度副詞] less desired, as they may receive fewer than 1,000 applications.
Overall, Engineering and History were the two most noteworthy courses in the past, and the year of 2025 will see the same pattern.
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