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  Young people are leaving their homes from rural areas to study or work in the cities. What are the reasons? Do advantages of this development outweigh its disadvantages?

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  解析&審題

  本題重復(fù)2013年12月24日原題。

  本題要求我們分析原因，并討論利弊，是一個(gè)綜合類的題目。要求討論的話題是為什么很多年輕人會(huì)離開(kāi)農(nóng)村到城市去學(xué)習(xí)和工作，這種現(xiàn)象是好還是壞?

  就原因而言，應(yīng)該比較簡(jiǎn)單，那就是農(nóng)村沒(méi)有好的工作和學(xué)習(xí)機(jī)會(huì)，而這些機(jī)會(huì)在城市里更容易找到。至于這是好事還是壞事，可以一分為二地討論。壞處包括城市會(huì)越來(lái)越擁擠，農(nóng)村則會(huì)越來(lái)越蕭條;農(nóng)村人到城市不容易找到工作，從而可能引發(fā)很多社會(huì)問(wèn)題。好處當(dāng)然也有，比如給城市發(fā)展提供了人力資源等等。

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  01

  Nowadays a growing number of young people are leaving rural areas in order to become successful economically or academically in urban areas.

  如今，越來(lái)越多的年輕人離開(kāi)農(nóng)村，以便在城市取得經(jīng)濟(jì)上或?qū)W業(yè)上的成功。

  解析

  (1) 本段開(kāi)門(mén)見(jiàn)山，引出下文即將討論的現(xiàn)象。

  (2) A growing number of young people 越來(lái)越多的年輕人

  (3) ...to become successful economically or academically ......取得經(jīng)濟(jì)上或?qū)W業(yè)上的成功(這是對(duì)題目原文 “to study or work”進(jìn)行的改寫(xiě))

  02

  It is a well-known fact that rural areas lack economic and academic opportunities compared with urban areas. Usually, a variety of serious issues confront young people in villages such as the high unemployment rate and low educational level. So, it is only logical that young people are being pushed away from rural areas and being pulled to urban areas in search of better-paid jobs or better-managed schools. In this push-and-pull situation, many families might encourage their young relatives to move to cities for work or study because there are not many economic or academic opportunities available in the rural areas.

  與城市地區(qū)相比，農(nóng)村地區(qū)缺乏經(jīng)濟(jì)和求學(xué)機(jī)會(huì)，這是眾所周知的事實(shí)。通常，農(nóng)村的年輕人面臨著各種各樣的嚴(yán)重問(wèn)題，比如就業(yè)率低，教育水平低。因此，年輕人被推著離開(kāi)農(nóng)村，并被吸引到城市去尋找薪水更高的工作或經(jīng)營(yíng)更好的學(xué)校，這是合乎邏輯的。在這種“推動(dòng)-吸引”的情形中，許多家庭可能會(huì)鼓勵(lì)其年輕親友搬到城市工作或?qū)W習(xí)，因?yàn)樵卩l(xiāng)村找不到太多的經(jīng)濟(jì)或求學(xué)機(jī)會(huì)。

  解析

  (1) 本段討論為什么鄉(xiāng)村年輕人會(huì)去城市發(fā)展。首先是鄉(xiāng)村缺少機(jī)會(huì)，然后是這些年輕人也會(huì)得到鼓勵(lì)去城市工作或求學(xué)。

  (2) A variety of 各種各樣的

  (3) Confront 面臨

  (4) In search of 尋找

  (5) Available 可以獲得的;可以使用的

  03

  This one-way traffic of human resources may have crucial effects on both rural and urban areas. To begin with, it may result in the imbalance of population between the already intensely populated urban areas and the rural areas that young people leave behind. While the cities get increasingly over-crowded, villages will suffer from the shortage of manpower. Another possible downside of this rural-urban mobility is that, without proper training, the young rural people moving into cities may not be able to find a job, which, then, will bring about a series of social problems. It is self-evident that, however, the migration of young people from the countryside to cities will provide sufficient human resources necessary for the urban development.

  這種單向的人力資源流動(dòng)可能會(huì)對(duì)農(nóng)村和城市地區(qū)產(chǎn)生至關(guān)重要的影響。首先，它可能會(huì)導(dǎo)致在已經(jīng)人口密集的城市和年輕人留在身后的鄉(xiāng)村地區(qū)之間的人口不平衡。當(dāng)城市變得越來(lái)越擁擠時(shí)，村莊卻將受到勞動(dòng)力短缺的影響。這種從農(nóng)村到城市的移動(dòng)還有一個(gè)缺點(diǎn)：如果沒(méi)有適當(dāng)?shù)呐嘤?xùn)，移居城市的農(nóng)村青年可能找不到工作，這將帶來(lái)一系列社會(huì)問(wèn)題。然而，不言而喻，青年人從農(nóng)村遷移到城市將為城市發(fā)展提供足夠的人力資源。

  解析

  (1) 本段論述鄉(xiāng)村年輕人進(jìn)入城市的好處和壞處：好處包括為城市發(fā)展提供勞動(dòng)力;壞處包括人口擁擠和相關(guān)社會(huì)問(wèn)題。

  (2) One-way traffic 單項(xiàng)流動(dòng)

  (3) Crucial effect 關(guān)鍵影響

  (4) Result in 導(dǎo)致

  (5) Leave behind 留在身后;拋開(kāi)

  (6) Shortage 短缺

  (7) Downside 不利之處

  (8) Self-evident 明顯的

  (9) Migration 遷移(本文替換使用了幾個(gè)單詞表達(dá)同樣意思：mobility; movement; traffic, exodus)

  04

  To sum up, looking for greater academic and professional opportunities is the major cause of the rural exodus. Whether this will lead to positive or negative effects, we still have to wait and see.

  總之，尋找更多的學(xué)習(xí)和職業(yè)機(jī)會(huì)是農(nóng)村人口外流的主要原因。這會(huì)帶來(lái)正面或負(fù)面的影響，我們?nèi)孕枋媚恳源?

  解析

  (1) 總結(jié)已經(jīng)論述的原因以及可能帶來(lái)的影響，但對(duì)其最終的影響表示還說(shuō)不準(zhǔn)。

  (2) Exodus (大規(guī)模)出走;離開(kāi)

  (3) Lead to 導(dǎo)致

  (4) Wait and see 拭目以待

  高分范文

  Nowadays a growing number of young people are leaving rural areas in order to become successful economically or academically in urban areas.

  It is a well-known fact that rural areas lack economic and academic opportunities compared with urban areas. Usually, a variety of serious issues confront young people in villages such as the high unemployment rate and low educational level. So, it is only logical that young people are being pushed away from rural areas and being pulled to urban areas in search of better-paid jobs or better-managed schools. In this push-and-pull situation, many families might encourage their young relatives to move to cities for work or study because there are not many economic or academic opportunities available in the rural areas.

  This one-way traffic of human resources may have crucial effects on both rural and urban areas. To begin with, it may result in the imbalance of population between the already intensely populated urban areas and the rural areas that young people leave behind. While the cities get increasingly over-crowded, villages will suffer from the shortage of manpower. Another possible downside of this rural-urban mobility is that, without proper training, the young rural people moving into cities may not be able to find a job, which, then, will bring about a series of social problems. It is self-evident that, however, the migration of young people from the countryside to cities will provide sufficient human resources necessary for the urban development.

  To sum up, looking for greater academic and professional opportunities is the major cause of the rural exodus. Whether this will lead to positive or negative effects, we still have to wait and see.

  建議背誦的句子

  1. So, it is only logical that young people are being pushed away from rural areas and being pulled to urban areas in search of better-paid jobs or better-managed schools.

  因此，年輕人被推著離開(kāi)農(nóng)村，并被吸引到城市去尋找薪水更高的工作或經(jīng)營(yíng)更好的學(xué)校，這是合乎邏輯的。

  2. To begin with, it may result in the imbalance of population between the already intensely populated urban areas and the rural areas that young people leave behind.

  首先，它可能會(huì)導(dǎo)致在已經(jīng)人口密集的城市和年輕人留在身后的鄉(xiāng)村地區(qū)之間的人口不平衡。

  3. Another possible downside of this rural-urban mobility is that, without proper training, the young rural people moving into cities may not be able to find a job, which, then, will bring about a series of social problems.

  這種從農(nóng)村到城市的移動(dòng)還有一個(gè)缺點(diǎn)：如果沒(méi)有適當(dāng)?shù)呐嘤?xùn)，移居城市的農(nóng)村青年可能找不到工作，這將帶來(lái)一系列社會(huì)問(wèn)題。

  4. To sum up, looking for greater academic and professional opportunities is the major cause of the rural exodus.

  總之，尋找更多的學(xué)習(xí)和職業(yè)機(jī)會(huì)是農(nóng)村人口外流的主要原因。

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