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  2021年8月7雅思大作文題目

  Some people believe that children have the freedom to make mistakes, while others argue that adults should prevent them from doing so. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

  范文及解析

  Introduction

  For children's upbringing, some reckon that adults, especially parents, should avoid them from making mistakes, while I tend to harbour the view that teenagers should not be totally shackled.

  【解析】教育類大話題：孩子是否有自由犯錯?在一定限制條件之下，允許孩子試錯，只要不走極端即可，如青少年犯罪。法律道德是基本底線。

  ? shackle vt. 束縛，阻撓，羈絆〔含貶義〕(用帶有情感色彩的詞，加強自己的立場)

  Body 1

  Admittedly, it is justifiable for some to advocate that guardians’ intervention is indispensable to some extent, since they are constitutionally responsible for their children’s growth. Smart parents understand that it cannot count solely on their kids, who, though indeed have the freedom, are too young to distinguish right from wrong, and that external conditions, adults’ advice and supervision, are needed. Therefore, mature adults, particularly parents, steps in and utilises their power. For instance, guardians may put a cap on what kind of video games teenagers play or what sorts of people adolescents make friends with in case those immature children get addicted to games containing too much violence or, even worse, sunk into gangs, which consequently render them off the right life track.

  【解析】讓步：從法律層面說，家長有責任防止孩子走上歧路，避免其受到不可逆的傷害，畢竟大多數孩子不夠成熟，不能明辨是非。

  ? guardian n. [律]監護人

  ? intervention n. 干預(褒)

  ? constitutionally adv. 合乎憲法地

  ? count solely on 僅僅只依賴于

  ? distinguish right from wrong 明辨是非

  ? step in v. 介入

  ? put a cap on v. 限制

  ? off the right life track 偏離人生正軌

  Body 2

  However, apart from the aforementioned cases, too much interference on children's making mistakes may incur repercussions running counter to adults’ expectation. More accurately, since most young children are to some degree rebellious, they are less likely to follow every piece of advice from adults, especially when the strict supervision develops into excessive control. Not surprisingly, this may fuel children’s grumble and push them to make mistakes instead. In fact, children should be allowed to learn from experiences. As long as young individuals are well-instructed, they are highly likely to learn from their mistakes about how to tell right from wrong, to take all factors into consideration before making decisions, and to reflect upon and correct themselves.

  【解析】除去以上的極端情況，孩子應該有自由在一定條件下試錯。從未成年人的特性出發，大多數孩子可能比較叛逆，一味地阻止可能適得其反。從試錯中讓孩子學會如何辨別是非，如何做決定前考慮周到，如何在犯錯后及時彌補，遠比家長直接介入更加令孩子印象深刻。

  ? interference n. 干涉(貶義)

  ? incur v. 導致(貶義)

  ? repercussion n. 后果(通常貶義)

  ? fuel vt. 加劇

  ? grumble n. 抱怨

  ? reflect upon oneself 反省

  Conclusion

  To recapitulate, children should overall learn to be responsible for their own decisions.

  【解析】重申觀點

  ? recapitulate v. 總結

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