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  劍橋雅思5test1寫作小作文題目：

  The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.

  Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

  劍橋雅思5test1小作文范文：

  The graph shows the increase in the ageing population in Japan, Sweden and the USA. It indicates that the percentage of elderly people in all three countries in expected to increase to almost 25% of the respective populations by the year 2040.

  In 1940 the proportion of people aged 65 or more stood at only 5% in Japan, approximately 7% in Sweden and 9% in the US. However, while the figures for the Western countries grew to about 15% in around 1990, the figure for Japan dipped to only 2.5% for much of this period, before rising to almost 5% again at the present time.

  In spite of some fluctuation in the expected percentages, the proportion of older people will probably continue to increase in the next two decades in the three countries. A more dramatic rise is predicted between 2030 and 2040 in Japan, by which time it is thought that the proportion of elderly people will be similar in the three countries.

  劍橋雅思5test1寫作小作文解析：

  這是一個典型的線圖，線圖一般是依據(jù)時間軸來描述某個狀況在一定時間內(nèi)的變化趨勢，所以在審題上很難出現(xiàn)偏差，但是線圖的難點在于線條變化曲折，如果完全描述，不但過于瑣碎，而且意義不大，所以線條的變化情況需要取舍，這是線圖的難點。

  第一步：確定X軸和Y軸

  X1 有序變量 年代 1940-2040，準確的說，線圖當中的時間軸變量屬于有序變量中的連續(xù)變量，

  X2 無序變量 國家(日本、瑞典、美國)

  Y 絕對變量 老人所占該國總?cè)巳罕壤?/span>

  第二步：分析圖表

  看到X1年代時間軸時，我們應當特別注意到時間是1940-2040，也就是本圖表包括了過去時間和將來時間，其過去時間和將來時間的分界點就在于2000-2020這個區(qū)間，所以分析時必須將跨越臨界點的變化趨勢分析出來，寫作時肯定用到。注意到這個特殊點之后，就開始進行常規(guī)的X, Y軸分析

  X2為Japan時，Y軸變化情形

  起點是5%，終點是35%，漲幅是30%。

  跨越時間臨界點的變化時繼續(xù)上漲

  變化趨勢，從起點1940-過了2000年，呈一個先下降后升高的趨勢，兩段終點為均為5%;之后緩慢升高，2030年達到10%;2030-2040年猛增，終點是35%。

  X2為Sweden時，Y軸變化情形

  起點是7%，終點是25%多一點，漲幅是18%

  跨越時間臨界點的變化是上漲，但是之后有個小的下降

  變化趨勢，持續(xù)上漲，整個過程只有1980-1990和2010-2030這兩個區(qū)段稍微下降

  X2為USA時，Y軸的變化情況

  起點為9%，終點是23%，漲幅為14%。

  跨越時間臨界點的變化為持平然后上漲

  變化趨勢，持續(xù)上漲，只是1940-1965和1982-2020為持平狀態(tài)

  X1為1940時，日本5%，瑞典7%，美國9%

  X1為1940到臨界點時，瑞典和美國上升，均達到15%左右;而日本先稍微下降而后上升，1940和臨界點的結(jié)果持平，5%

  X1為臨界點到終點2040，瑞典和美國繼續(xù)上升，最后終點是25%左右;而日本繼續(xù)上升，特別是2030后猛升，最后超越瑞典和美國，終點值最高35%

  第三步：確定框架

  有X1,X2同時存在時，就應當有2個文章發(fā)展框架，如此處可以按照X2為主框架，X1為從框架來進行描述，如本例X2(瑞典、日本、美國)，即描述瑞典的變化趨勢，再描述美國的，最后描述日本的。

  同樣可以X1為主框架，即描述三國起點的狀況，再是起點到臨界點的狀況，最后是臨界點到終點的狀況，范文采用的就是這樣的描述方式。

  兩種邏輯框架均可以，只是要特別注意，分析部分的重要信息應當不能有遺漏，從框架的信息必須安排好。

  題目

  The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.

  第一段

  The graph shows the increase in the ageing population in Japan, Sweden and the USA.

  作者沒有一上來提示圖表內(nèi)容，而是直接奔向中心思想，也就是文章的主旨句。

  increase in sth 注意名詞increase后面常用到的介詞in

  It indicates that the percentage of elderly people in all three countries is expected to increase to almost 25% of the respective populations by the year 2040.

  對文章中心句的進一步解釋說明，即具體說明increase

  句子主干為 The percentage is expected to increase to sth, be expected to do表示對未來的一種預測，increase to 25%中的to為prep

  第二段

  In 1940 the proportion of people aged 65 or more stood at only 5% in Japan, approximately 7% in Sweden and 9% in the US.

  說明起點，主干為the proportion stood at , stand at+數(shù)值，相當于is+數(shù)值

  people aged 65 or more,其中aged 65 or more為后置定語，aged [adj], 如a man aged between 25 and 35

  However, while the figures for the Western countries grew to about 15% in around 1990, the figure for Japan dipped to only 2.5% for much of this period, before rising to almost 5% again at the present time.

  說明了從起點到臨界點之前三個地區(qū)的數(shù)據(jù)變化情況，

  表示數(shù)據(jù)變化的表達是 the figures grow to, the figures dip to, the figure rise to這樣三個句子，通過while [conj], 將西方國家和日本對照來說，接著通過before [prep]將日本的兩段變化情形描述出來，

  表示時間的部分 in around 1990, for much of this period, at the present time

  第三段

  In spite of some fluctuation in the expected percentages, the proportion of older people will probably continue to increase in the next two decades in the three countries.

  總體說明了臨界點后的趨勢變化，注意時態(tài)為將來時，the proportion will continue to do sth

  In spite of some fluctuation 一個簡單的讓步從句，就把一些不作具體描述的波動一帶而過，這點在描述線圖當中必須掌握，記住“忽視細微變化”

  A more dramatic rise is predicted between 2030 and 2040 in Japan, by which time it is thought that the proportion of elderly people will be similar in the three countries.

  這句話其實是兩句截然不同的兩層意思，第一層是日本2030到2040上漲幅度巨大，第二層意思是三個國家終點相似，通過一個簡單的時間關(guān)聯(lián) by which time (2040) 把兩個簡單句連接成一個復雜句，這種技巧尤其是在線圖和流程圖中體現(xiàn)得特別明顯，因為兩種都是以時間為發(fā)展趨勢，涉及到很多瑣碎的變化，通過時間關(guān)聯(lián)成分，如by which time, until, during the same period，when使句型復雜化，這點需要不斷學習掌握。

  be predicted/ be supposed/ be expected 這些常用來表示推測的將來趨勢

  詞匯句型積累

  線圖主要描述隨著時間的某種的變化，所以其核心的兩個表達內(nèi)容就是時間表達和變化表達

  時間表達

  By the year 2040, in 1940, in around 1990, for much of this period, at the present time, in the next two decades, between 2030 and 2040, by which time

  變化表達

  The increase in sth, be expected to increase to sth, The figure stood at sth, grow to sth, dip to sth, rise to sth, a more dramatic rise

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