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  《劍16》Test 1 Task 2

  審題

  拿到題目的一瞬間，同學們是否發覺此題的思考維度可高可低，可宏觀可微觀，話題涉及歷史，也算頗為抽象稍具難度了。

  筆者稍加揣測大多數學生看到此題后的頭腦風暴，應該多為諸如“人們閑的沒事干、人們想知道過去的歷史從而指導、過好現在生活“之類的說辭。請持此類觀點的同學自行翻閱《劍16》后面貼上的考生范文，再來閱讀本文，需時刻牢記題中的限定”they live in”。

  索性雅思寫作不涉及考察學生的學術視野和研究方向，所以本題大可不必“往上走“去談什么叫作”地緣視閾下的社會變遷“，這樣太難了、太高了。筆者索性就從大多數學生可能會想到的觀點著手去盤這篇看似簡單實則微難的文章。

  Introduction

  Seeking novelty seems to be one facet of human nature that can hardly be bent. It prevails, even spreading to all walks of life, with discovering the history of residence no exception. Of course, reading materials or having a casual chat with people around will suffice.

  開局的引入不用拖拖拉拉給人云里來霧里去的感覺，直接交待“筆者要干嘛“就行了。

  Lexis的雕琢不要刻意為了用詞而用詞，用得恰如其分就好，prevail, suffice你品品。

  Body 1

  Surrounded by various news, especially the marketplace gossip, most of us may be rather concerned with the ins and outs of our own real estate. An ordinary murder case that has been conducted in a community, if deliberately exaggerated, may easily stir us up, driving us to ardently probe into the history of this community, and such exploration goes beyond. Certainly, there are either instances where a house, after meticulous investigation, turns out to be a former residence of a celebrity or instances where a building finally proves to be a memorial to a particular person or a historic event. This can all be attributed to people’s yearning for novelties. I have also been to ‘New Place’, the world-renowned dwelling of William Shakespeare in Stratford, where, on an annual basis, millions of patrons are fascinated by the fine arts of tragedies; I still feel perplexed why this literary lion, who is not so well-educated, is able to make it right HERE, and this curiosity always acts as an incentive to pay another visit.

  首二句以“事件感“代入去回應人們的獵奇心理，這也是一種最常見的寫作手法;

  本段二三句中出現的語法現象值得一提：if從句的省略現象作插入語，后面there be句型中嵌套了either … or …的句間平行結構 (而且是從句的呼應平行)。還是非常建議同學們背誦及模仿使用的。如果句法不懂，就問你的寫作老師吧;

  本段的頭兩個句子的syntactic structure都十分高能，做好解構和模仿工作吧?定、狀從用得好，你就能領略到寫作世界的蔚然大觀;

  “This can be attributed to ……“ 長句子之后嵌入一個短句。前面的句子內部信息較為密集，需要在此處剎個車、緩一下信息流淌速度，使得文章有張有弛;

  機考已成大勢所趨，一不小心就敲多了，但表意清晰、句子水平，考官會愿意讀下去的，全文300字出頭的文章筆者考場親測有效，放心寫，別跑題就成。同學們也可以讀一下C16 T3后面官方附贈的sample answer, 也是350 words+，也不失為一篇不錯的文章，分數不高，但是道理講明白了就成。

  Body 2

  As to the research methods, reading materials or search information online is a commonplace. More precisely, it is due to the well-established database formed through geographical links that a person can easily get to the bottom of such residence, as long as it is not so rare and obscure. By the way, during the trip, I also talked a lot with some senior townsmen who have already familiarized themselves with the surroundings, and their jocular remarks shed a positive light on my misgivings.

  Lexis: 如果你的作文要7+，那么less common vocabulary, compound, and idiomatic expressions必不可少，如：well-established, get to the bottom of, familiarize sb. with sth., shed light on, jocular remarks等等;還有那個rare and obscure看見了么，修辭中的押尾韻 (consonance)。

  TR: “達意” (or “表意功能”)永遠是雅思寫作語言關的第一要義，追求極簡與自然即可。

  Conclusion

  In conclusion, I argue that the main reason is people’s curiosity, no matter it is for a utilitarian or unconscious purpose, and that the methods have been detailed above.

  只要實現了表意功能，結尾偷懶又如何?筆者也就推薦一句復合句完結就好。筆力不夠就拆成兩句也罷。

  雖然全篇對于Task Response中reasons一支的回應，筆者僅拋出“獵奇“一詞，但是經過body 1的詳述后，結局分層為for utilitarian or unconscious purposes, TR也是OK的。